《My youth, my school》——青春如诗|163

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文字 / 深圳承翰实验学校国际课程校区 陈汝涵
编辑 / 择校君（图片均来源网络）
注：标红字体为评委删改

《My youth my school》

Time flows as we grow up. Sometimes youth is confused, sometimes youth will fall, so we often think about youth: what is youth?
It is the season of fire in life; what is written in youth?
Write a very long poem; what do you want, to stay in youth? Lead a regretful life?
We need to understand that youth is not a romantic month, red apricot or green willow, nor is it a rich ivory tower. However, it is a stage of life that is a gradually maturing process.
The gentle breeze brings the happy news of youth. The birds sing beautifully, the campus filled with our vigorous posture and some moving stories.
The campus of the junior high school is beautiful. Walking onto campus, looking at the willow trees, I feel that they seem to be smiling at us and calling us forward. In these long years, how many memories of youth, how much sadness, how much happiness can we possibly have?
Youth is like a song, and with the pace of our progress, with each step forward, we feel the harvest of autumn and the miracle of flowers. How beautiful everything is! Unconsciously, I feel as if time has frozen. I am immersed in this beautiful memory and cannot extricate myself.
Reliving memories of the past, the heart occasionally has some pains. I want to go back to the past, but it is unrealistic. However, I think that even if it was only one day, I would cherish it. When I think of junior high school, I hold the view that three years is a long time, but, I did not expect that these three years would pass so quickly. I have graduated in a twinkling of an eye, and I can only say goodbye to my classmates.
On campus mornings, as you walk in, you can hear students reading aloud, occasionally accompanied by the crisp songs of birds, which are pleasant to hear. The breeze in the morning will gently blow over your cheeks and make people feel very warm. I always remember that in the afternoon at school, the girls were chatting and the boys were playing basketball. The setting sun was the most beautiful, and the wild geese would fly across the sky. Everything was beautiful.
On the stage of youth, we are always sentimental; we will weep for the tragic fate of the hero in the book and scream for our favorite star and laugh for the happy ending of an idol play.
At that time, naturally, like most people, I liked EXO, a Korean combination. I admired them not only because of their beautiful appearance, but also for their dreams. At that time, I bought a lot of posters which were posted on the wall and even my parents were not allowed to touch them. Now, I think I was too childish. I also had the idea of selling those piled-up posters, and then I thought it was better to put them in a drawer as a souvenir of youth.
Now we are no longer children, there is no childhood naughty, vigor, we know the friendship, in the baptism of the wind and rain, we grow up. We know what is precious and how to cherish it. We do not express our emotions, but prefer to keep them in our hearts. We have grievances that are no longer spoken of casually. We prefer to be repressed in our hearts. Now, we are afraid of facing risks, and we no longer have the courage of childhood.
When it rains outside, it deepens our mood. The sound of rain is beautiful. I do not like rainy days, but I like to listen to the sound of the rain. It will remind me of the past bit by bit and remind me of past people and things.
Looking at the desks and chairs in the classroom, neatly arranged, memories of youth reappeared in front of me. The students listened carefully to the teacher who was waving chalk on the platform, as if butterflies dancing on the blackboard, beautifully.
Youth has brought me a lot of happiness. But now I do not mind losing it, because it is always the deepest warmth of the heart. Now, I wish that all the youth out there could succeed in what they desire to achieve and not forget their original dream.
If youth is a delicate flower, I understand that a single blossom is never spring; rather, spring should be a colorful world. If youth is a tree on the great shore of the earth, I understand that standing alone is never upright, rows of trees, is the Great Wall of green sand shelter. If youth is a leaf on sea sailing alone, we can see that it is difficult to sail a solitary sail.
Ah, Youth Campus, you are my dream now, you are the memory I will never forget; I love you - Youth Campus. I love you- my youth.

Brent点评

Comments: Student possesses a firm understanding of common literary concepts and techniques, and overall, her train of thought is coherent and relatable for most readers. However, there are areas where basic grammatical rules were overlooked, causing some sentences to have obscure meaning or awkward phrasing. The writer deserves commendation for writing such a moving piece about love, loss and the power of memory. Excellent work.

Brent是中英法三语写作作家、美籍老师，熟悉中国文化，拥有8年写作经验，曾帮助众多国际学校学生提高写作水平，自己也多次考取托福满分（托福120分）雅思8.5分。

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