September 28, 2023

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[2023/ 9/ 23] The graph below shows the percentage of people visiting museum once a month or more between 1980 and 2010.

【主体段分段】：按照趋势分段

【开头段】

The line graph compares four age groups that went to the museum at least once a month from 1980 to 2010.

【概述段】

Overall, only the percentage of people aged between 46 and 65 showed a downward trend. Besides, the most dramatic change could be found in the figure for the youngest group.

思路要点：

- 只有灰色整体下降趋势

- 蓝色变化幅度最大

【Body 1】

Originally, more people aged 26-45 visited the museum than other age groups, with the figure of 30%.Subsequently, this figuresaw a noticeable climbto 40% in 1988,before falling slightlyby 5% in the next 8 years.The last 14 years witnessed a sharp growthto 55%.Similarly, the proportion of young people(18-25)soaredfrom only 15% in 1980 to almost 70% in 2010,overtakingthe figure for the 26-to-45-year-olds in 1996.

思路要点：橘色+蓝色

- 橘色：第一年数据最高(30%)→显著上升到1988年达到40%→随后8年轻微下降了5%→最后14年急剧上升到55%

- 蓝色：从1980年的15%急剧上升到2010年的几乎70%，在1996年超过橘色

【Body 2】

We can also see thatin the first 8 years,a marginal risefrom 25% to 30%could be found inthe proportion of 46-to-65-year-old people,after which there was a remarkable dropby 15% in the final year.Likewise, the figure for the oldest age grouptripledto 30% in the beginning 16-year period,followed by a descent to10% in 2004.Afterwards, this figure exceeded the percentage of people aged 46-65 anddoubledin 2010.

思路要点：灰色+黄色

- 灰色：1980-1988之间从25%小幅度上升到30%→最终一年明显下降了15%

- 黄色：最开始16年上涨了3倍达到30%→2004年下降到10%→超过黄色，最终在2010年翻倍