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[2024/ 5/ 18] The pie charts below show the percentage of coffee productions from different regions,of consumption in different regions and of the profits in different fields in 2014.

【主体段分段】：

一饼一段

【开头段】

The pie chars present information about where coffee was produced and consumed in various places, as well as how the profit was allocated into four aspects for the year 2014.

【概述段】

It is clear thatSouth Africawas the primary producer ofcoffee,whilethe major marketwas in Europe.Also,logistics wasthe most profitable sector.

思路要点：

- South Africa产量最大

- Europe消耗量最大

- delivery利润占比最大

【Body 1】

As is shown in the first chart,South Africatook the dominant position incoffee production, with the figure of 44%.By contrast,only 16% of the coffeewas producedfrom Vietnam. Japan and Indonesiashared a similar figurein terms of coffee production, with roughly 20%.

思路要点：production

- South Africa最高（44%）

- Vietnam最低（16%）

- Japan 和Indonesia相似（大约20%）

【Body 2】

When it comes tothe consumption of coffee,we can see thatpeople in Europeconsumed the largest amount ofcoffee(41%).America came next,with 39% of coffee consumed. The coffee consumed in Japan onlyaccounted for 8%of all the coffee consumption, and the remaining 12% of the coffeewas sold inother areas of the world.

思路要点：consumption

- Europe最高（41%）

- America第二（39%）

- Japan最低（8%）

- 剩下地区12%

【Body 3】

Regardingthe composition of profits,it is clear thatcoffee profitwas mainly derived fromdelivering process(51%), more than twice the figure for retailing.A lower proportion ofprofits went to producers(15%),5% higher than the figure forexporters.

思路要点：profit distribution

- delivery最大(51%)，大约是retailers的两倍

- producers较低（15%），比exporters高5%