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[2024/ 5/ 25] The table shows information about the number of Australian people who visited the seven most popular destinations in 1999 and 2009.
【主体段分段】：
Body 1：New Zealand, UK, US（两年数值较高，但变化幅度小）
Body 2：其余4个国家（两年数值较低，但变化幅度较大）
【开头段】
The table illustrates how many Australian tourists paid a visit to seven most attractive countries for the years of 1999 and 2009.
【概述段】
It is clear thatthe popularityof all the seven destinationsincreasedin the given period.This is especially true forChina since itsaw the most dramatic growth.
思路要点：
- 去七个国家的游客数量都增多
- 去China的游客数量涨幅最大
【Body 1】
We can see thatin the initial year, New Zealandtook the leadin the number of Australian tourists,with the figureof 500,700. UK and UScame next, with 400,000 and 300,000 Australian people making the trip.After 10 years, arrivals to New Zealandstill ranked the top,rising significantly by113%.A less remarkable growth by60% and 33%was found inthe other top two popular destinations.
思路要点：
New Zealand, UK, US
1. 1999年：New Zealand数值最高(500,700)，UK第二(400,000)，US第三(300,000)
2. 2009年：
(1) New Zealand数值依然最高，显著上升了113%
(2) 其余2个国家：上升幅度略小（涨幅分别为60%和33%）
【Body 2】
By contrast, fewer Australians chose to visit Indonesia, Fiji, Japan and Chinain both years,butthese four countrieswitnessed a more noticeable climb intheir popularity.To be more specific,China only attracted 86,000 travelers from Australia in 1999,half the figure forIndonesia.Subsequently,these two figureswas on a dramatic increase, rising by249% and 127% respectively.Besides,roughly 110,000 surveyed Australians visited Fiji and Japanin the first year, and this figuremore than doubledafter a decade.
思路要点：Indonesia, Fiji, Japan, China
- 其余四个国家数据较小，但涨幅较大
- China1999年数据为86,000，大约为Indonesia的一半；2009年两者数据分别急剧上升了249%和127%
- Fiji和Japan在1999年数据相似(大约110,000)→随后翻倍
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