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November 1, 2024

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The graph below gives information about household computer possession in one European country between 1997 and 2011.

【主体段分段】：

按照 <变化幅度> 分段

Body 1：黄色、橙色（变化幅度大）

Body 2：绿色、蓝色（变化幅度小）

开头段

The line chart compares changes in computer ownership per family in a country in Europe over the period from 1997 to 2011.

概述段

It is clear thatthe overall ownership of computers in this country generally increased.Also, for most of the years in the given period, families with at least 3 computers occupied the largest share.

思路要点：

- 电脑拥有量整体呈现上升趋势（黄色下降，绿色、橙色上升）

- 大多数年份，拥有至少三台电脑的家庭占最大比重

Body paragraph 1

We can find thatin the initial year of the period, roughly half of the surveyed families did not have computers.Aftera period of fluctuations,this figurefell slightly to35% in 2005.In the next year,there emerged a sharp rise to41%,followed bya dramatic drop to 30% in 2007.The final 4 years witnessed a constant decrease by6 % in this figure.By contrast,the proportion of families with 2 computersalmost tripled to30% in the 14-year period, overtaking the figure for those with no computers in 2010.

思路要点：

- 黄色：第一年数据约为50%→随后经历波动→2005年小幅度下降到35%→2006年急剧上升到41%→2007年急剧下降到30%→随后四年持续下降了6%

- 橙色：14年内几乎上升了 3倍达到30%，其中在2010年超过黄色数据

Body paragraph 2

Such significant changes were not found in the rest two groups. In the original year,families with at least 3 computers made up the second largest group, accounting for 43%.Afterwards, this figurefluctuatedatapproximately 45%, exceeding the figure for families without computers in 2000.Similarly, the percentage of households with only one computerwas on a continuous increasein the given period,climbingfrom only 1% to 9%in the last year.

思路要点：绿色+蓝色（变化幅度小）

- 绿色、蓝色数据变化幅度较小

- 绿色：第一年数据排第二（43%）→随后在45%左右波动，其中在2000年超过黄色

- 蓝色：持续上升，从1%最终达到9%