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The graph below shows changes in average monthly cost (euros)of four kinds of mobile contracts in a particular country in 2012.

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按照 <数值大小> 分段

Body 1：蓝色、橙色（数值高）

Body 2：灰色、黄色（数值低

开头段

The line graph compares four cellphone plan providers in terms of their average monthly prices in a European country over a period of 9 months, starting from December in 2011 to August in 2012.

概述段

It is clear thatDemoremained to be the most expensive optionover the given period,whileETX wasthe most economical one.Also, the monthly cost of services provided by Demoexperienced the most remarkable growth.

思路要点：

- Demo(蓝色)数据始终最高，ETS(黄色)数据始终最低

- Demo(蓝色)数据变化幅度最大

Body paragraph 1

We can find thatpeople had to pay more if they signed a contract with Demo or Alpha.Originally，Demo charged €22 for their monthly plan,after whichthis figureunderwent a slight decrease by€2 in February.Subsequently,there emerged a significant rise tothe peak at €33 in July,before dropping marginallyto €30 in August.Likewise,the first month witnessed a modest fall inthe price of Alpha from €18 to €16.Afterminor fluctuations, this figuregrew noticeably to€26 by the end of the period.

思路要点：蓝色、橙色(数值整体较高)

- 蓝色、橙色数据整体较高

- Demo（蓝色）：一开始€22→2月小幅度下降了€2→7月显著上升到€33→8月小幅度下降到€30

- Alpha（橙色）：第一个月从€18小幅度下降到€16→随后小幅度波动，到8月显著上升到€26

Body paragraph 2

However, services provided by the other companies were relatively cheaper. With the price of €16, Silmranked the third placeamong the four providers in the beginning.Subsequently, this figuresaw a period of fluctuations, ranging from€12to€17.A similar trend could be foundin the charge of ETX plans.Starting at€8, its figuredeclined gradually to€6 in March.Afterwards, this figuremore than doubledin June,followed bya dramatic decrease to €8 in the end.

思路要点：灰色、黄色(数值整体较低)

- 灰色、黄色数据较低

- Silm（灰色）：一开始排第三(€16)→随后在€12 到€17范围内波动

- ETX（黄色）：一开始€8→随后逐步下降，3月达到€6→随后到6月翻倍→8月急剧下降到€8