支招小作文(209) I 静态多柱四个国家垃圾处理方式对比|recycling|used|waste|小作文|雅思

December 20, 2024

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The graph below shows four methods of dealing with waste in four countries.

【主体段分段】：按照 <性别> 分段

方法1：按照<图例>分段（本篇文章采用此种分段方法）

Body 1：绿色(recycling)+浅蓝色(landfilling)

Body 2：其余两种方式

方法2：按照<国家>分段

Body 1：Netherlands

Body 2：其余三个国家

开头段

The bar chart compares the Netherlands, Italy, Spain and UK with regard to the waste treatment methods.

概述段

Overall, recycling isthe primary method of waste disposalin the Netherlands,whilelandfilling isthe dominant approachin the other three countries.

思路要点：

- Netherlands中，recycled占比最高

- 剩下三个国家中，landfilled 占比最高

Body paragraph 1

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that68% of the waste in the Netherlands is recycled,yetthis disposal technique is only used for no more than 20% of the waste in Italy, Spain and Britain. People in these three countriesput most of their waste intolandfilling sites,withthe British landfilling 65% of their waste, and Italians and Spanish people burying 40% of their waste.

思路要点：绿色(recycling)+浅蓝色(landfilling)

- 绿色(recycling：Netherlands数据为68%，但剩下三个国家数据不足10%

- 浅蓝色(landfilling)：Italy、Spain、Britain中landfilling数据都最高（UK→65%，Italy、Spain→40%）；Netherlands数据仅为8%

Body paragraph 2

By contrast, the differences inthe use of burning and chemical treatmentare less pronounced across the four countries. Burning isthe second favored choicein Spain and Italy,whereit accounts for 30% and 21% of waste disposal respectively. In the UK,however, only 3% of waste is incinerated, making it the least popular option there.As forchemical treatment, all four countriesmanage a similar proportion of waste in this way,with figures ranging from15%to18%.

思路要点：深蓝色(burnt) + 橙色(used as chemicals)

- burnt、used as chemicals两种方式在四个国家间的数据差异不大

- 深蓝色(burnt)：在Spain和Italy中数据排第二，分别为30%和21%；在UK数据最低，仅为3%

- 橙色(used as chemicals)：四个国家数据差异不大，区间范围是从15%变化到18%