在中学英语词汇教学中,用take表示“花费时间”时,建议严格要求学生记住:主语是物体,而不是人。这个主语可以是具体的物体,也可以是一件事(如动词不定式短语,它本身代表一件事)。这样能帮助学生掌握最基本、最常用的用法,避免混淆。虽然也存在主语是人、用take表示花费时间的表达,但那样容易打乱教学逻辑。只有先把“物体作主语”这一基本结构理解透彻,再讲其他变体才有意义;否则,90%以上的学生都会出错,教学效果大打折扣。
1.Only English homework takes my brother 40 minutes each day.
2.The maths paper took me over two hours.
3.An English exam takes two hours.
4.To finish the work took a day.(真正主语)
5.It took a day to finish the work.(形式主语)
今天推荐的原创英文中就有类似的问题。虽然该文还有其他方面的错误,仍然感谢原文作者提供的真实语境材料。看看原文吧,你能发现几个问题?
一,我发现的问题
这段英文至少存在14个典型问题,值得认真分析。改好后,作文至少能提分14分。这些问题关系到从句引导词,主语从句,定语从句,冠词用法,动词不定式做主语,动词时态单词拼写等六个重点。理解之后,在其它题型(语法单选10分和语法填空题15分)英语科完全可能再提升5分以上。这样,高考总分至少可以再增加19分。
二,分析问题并修改
我非常喜欢这位作者的文章和他学习英语的态度。因为他不抄袭范文,坚持独立写作,虽然问题很多,但是纠错之后,绝对收获满满。
(一)主语从句引导词that不能省略;商业中心shopping mall或者mall;根据语境判断,这里应该是“商业中心建设完工”,因此用complete最准确;定语从句引导词不能脱离先行词单独使用,这里可以用非限制性定语从句调在句中;地铁站要有数量限定词the;(5个错误)
It seems that a shopping mall, which is next to the entrance of the Xintang Jie subway station, will be completed in several months.
(二)因为还没有完工,所有用将来时态will become;这里可以用现在分词做定语,更简洁;商业中心应该是惠及附近所有的市民,而 不仅仅是隔壁的群众,用nearby做定语;市民应该是复数形式citizens。(4个错误)
It will become convenient for the citizens living nearby...
(三)根据语境提示,这里可以用原因状语从句;take花时间,主语应该是物体不是人,可以重新调整,用动词不定式to walk做主语;spend单独写一句;(3个错误)
It will become convenient for the citizens living nearby because it takes only five minutes to walk to the mall. They can spend their leisure time over there.
(四)hang才是动词原形;用Let's...结构更地道。(2个错误)
It's a cloudy day. Let's hang out.
最后修改版本如下
It seems that a shopping mall, which is next to the entrance of the Xintang Jie subway station, will be completed in several months. It will become convenient for the citizens living nearby because it takes only five minutes to walk to the mall. They can spend their leisure time over there.It's a cloudy day. Let's hang out.
一座购物中心似乎即将在几个月后完工,它就位于新塘街地铁站入口旁边。对于住在附近的市民来说会非常方便,因为步行到那里只需五分钟。他们可以在那里度过闲暇时光。今天是个阴天,我们出去逛逛吧。
三,总结
思考题[微风][烟花]
1.To clean the room__(花费) me two days.
2.I like the sweater__(花费) ¥150.
3.The art exam __you an hour, didn't it?
4.Let's hang out, __ we?
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