外语自言自语陪练 | 星期话题:文化(Culture)| 目标:雅思冲分本系列为「契苾小优」雅思备考专用输出,转载请注明出处。
形式:雅思口语 Part 2 话题卡口吻
Alright, the cue card says: describe a place of cultural importance in your country. Hmm… let me think… 我老家是武威,古称凉州,位于三大高原交汇处,是西北首府、六朝古都。
I'd like to talk about Wuwei — anciently called Liangzhou — a city where three great plateaus meet, the old northwest capital and a six-dynasty ancient capital. It has a really long history, 嗯……"有文化意义"怎么说更地道来着…… it's a place of great cultural significance, I think that's the phrase. 对,cultural significance。
The city is, um… 它最出名的是铜奔马,就是那匹"马踏飞燕"。In English it's called the "Galloping Bronze Horse" or the "flying horse"… 其实官方叫 Bronze Galloping Horse Treading on a Flying Swallow,太长了我记不住,说 "the flying horse statue" 老外也能懂。
What makes it special is that… 凉州在唐代是河西重镇,张议潮就是从这儿起事收复河西的。This place carries, like, over a thousand years of history. 嗯,"承载历史"可以说 carry 吗?应该是 bears 或者 holds a thousand years of history. 用 bears 更有分量。
If you visit today, you can still see the 雷台墓, where the horse was unearthed. 呃,"出土"是 unearthed 还是 excavated?都是挖出来,但文物用 unearthed 更常见。The museum there tells the story of, um… 丝绸之路 and the Silk Road trade.
So yeah, that's the place I'd recommend. 收尾——it's not just old buildings, it's where my roots are.
【语法笔记】
- be of great cultural significance 比 "has cultural meaning" 地道得多。雅思里把 important 升级成 of great significance / value 是加分项。
- bear / hold a thousand years of history:"承载"别直译成 carry(容易听成"搬运")。bear 在这里是"带有、铭刻",更书面。
- be unearthed / be excavated:出土文物用 unearthed 最自然;excavated 偏"考古发掘"动作本身。
- Part 2 时间线:描述"至今仍有意义"用现在完成时has stood / has remained,比纯一般现在时显得更连贯。
- 中式英语预警:想说"我很喜欢这个地方",别说 I very like this place(错)。正确是 I like this place very much 或 I'm really fond of this place。
【今日表达 TOP3】
- a place of cultural significance —— 有文化意义的地方(替换 a culturally important place)
- be unearthed —— (文物)被出土
- I'm really fond of… —— 我很喜欢……(替换 I like… very much,更口语自然)
本系列为「契苾小优」雅思备考专用输出,转载请注明出处。
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