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The bar chart below shows the number of five different types of non-medical staff employed at a clinic in the UK between 2000 and 2015.
主体段分段方法:按照<变化幅度>分段
主体1:administrative staff,IT support staff, cleaners(变化幅度大)
主体2:maintenance staff,security guards(变化幅度小)
开头段
The bar chart illustrates changes in the number of employees across five non-medical roles in a UK clinic between 2000 and 2015.
概述段
Overall, the five positionsexhibited varying trends, with IT support staffexperiencing the most dramatic growth.Additionally, administrative staffremained the largest groupthroughout the given period.
思路要点:
- 五种岗位员工数量呈现不同变化趋势,其中IT support staff变化最急剧
- administrative staff人数始终最高
Body paragraph 1
Three out of the five occupationssaw significant changesover the 15-year period. Managerial staffmore than doubled,rising rapidlyfrom 45 in 2000 to 110 in 2015.Likewise, the number of IT engineerssoaredfrom just 5 to 55,representing an 11-fold increase.By contrast, the number of cleanersdeclined steadilyfrom 30 to 10 during the same period.
思路要点:administrative staff,IT support staff, cleaners
- 有三种岗位人数变化显著
- administrative staff:人数几乎上涨超过2倍,2000年为45→急剧上升到2015年达到110
- IT support staff:200年为5→2015年急剧上升到55
- cleaners:持从30持续下降到10
Body paragraph 2
The remaining two groups,however,experienced far less significant changes.Starting at20 in 2000, the number of maintenance staffbarely changedduring the 15 years,dipping marginallyto 19 by 2015.Meanwhile,despiteminor fluctuations, the figure for security guardskept relatively stableat around 15.
思路要点:maintenance staff,security guards
- 其余两组员工人数变化幅度相对较小
- maintenance staff:2000年为20→随后15年几乎不变,到2015年小幅度下降到19
- security guards:轻微波动,但整体人数大约稳定在15
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