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The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.

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主体段分段方法:按照 <趋势> 分段

Body 1:total、40-64、65+

Body 2:15-39、under-15

开头段

The table compares the populations of New Zealand across four age groups in 2011 and 2012.

概述段

Overall, the total populationexperienced a rising trend,with an increase inthe number ofpeople aged over 40,whilethe reverse was true for the twoyounger groups.The 65-and-over groupremained the smallest,despiterecording by far the most substantial growth.

思路要点:

- 总人口上升

- 40岁以上人口数量上升,40岁以下人口数量下降

- 65+人口一直最低,但上涨幅度最大

Body paragraph 1

Looking at the information in more detail, the overall populationgrew marginallyfrom 4,381,269 in 2011 to 4,410,284 in 2012,representing an increase of0.6%.The same trend could be seen inthe age group of 40-to-64,with the figure risingfrom 1,331,907 to 1,339,898 over the same period.A much more pronounced growth was seenamongthose aged 65 and over, whose populationgrew by4%,reaching596,903 in 2012.

思路要点:total、40-64、65+

- 总人口:从2011年的4,381,269小幅上升到2012年的4,410,284,涨幅为0.6%

- 40-64:也上涨0.6%,从1,331,907上升到1,339,898

- 65+:急剧上升了4%,2012年达到596,90

Body paragraph 2

However,the two younger age groupsexhibited slight declinesin population.Althoughthe 15-39-year-oldsconstituted the largest age groupin both years, their numberfell slightlyfrom 1,577,256 in 2011 to 1,574,102 in 2012,a drop of0.2%.Similarly,there was a decline of0.2% in the number ofunder-15s, from 898,160 in 2011 to 896,364 one year later.

思路要点:15-39、under-15

- 15-39:人口数量始终最高,但从2011年的1,577,256小幅下降了0.2%,达到 1,574,102

- under-15:也下降了0.2%,从2011年的898,160下降到2012年的896,364